rapper's flaw

Thought this one up while i was in gp..for once i actually dint reali listen to Mr judian, coz i was trying to pen tis down. N i kinda felt guilty u know, coz he is the best teacher ive probably had, n i dint wana make him feel let down. But hey, penning down songs also aid ur language rite?. so i was in fact doing gp, but in my own way, the rapper way. Well u know how rappers tend to use abusive language? Well tis one is bout tat, n tis is how it goes

This one's for those,
who think they are cool,
those rappers,
who dont play,
by any rules,
This from a fan,
of ur music,
thorough and true,
Yet i still hate,
Some things u guys do,
Creating lyrical explosives,
in the name of poetry,
Good Lord, are u kidding me?
Cant you people, write
even one line,
absent of vulgarity?
Coz poetry is all bout,
the emotion, bursting out raw,
Stories of your life,experience,
the things you saw,
I dont mean to be,
overly critical, but ur,
trying too hard to be sensational,
and ur raps have a flaw,
its just a fusion, of
abuses and grandour,
so ditch that gangster attitude,
it aint working,
parents aren't comfortable,
with your abusing,
stick to simple words,
that make it sound good,
so that fans like me,
wont be dissing you,
for being too rude,
and parents,
caling you lyrical fools.

Godlover